Sunday, October 24, 2010

Sick with Love :/

My thoughts are melancholy and sad 
It seems as if everything's gone bad
His face wanders in my mind
and all I want to do is turn back time
Over & Over thoughts hinder my trust
but was it that our love only consisted of lust. . .

4 comments:

  1. Extremely great poem babe. It's very meaningful even though it is not very long and you should consider being a poet babe.

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  2. this poem is very prolific and though simple in vocabulary it conveys the message of the unkown in love in a very easy way to understand i feel the rhyming also had a nice hook to it i wish it was longer too!:)

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  3. Really loved this poem, it's short yet to the point. Great word choice.

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  4. Please delete this blog immediately! It is a school wide policy that our campus does not have blogs. You have earned points for the assignment so do not worry about deleting it.

    Your blog needs to be deleted by Saturday, December 11th.

    Ms. Kuzma

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